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Just got the copyright to "Time Traveler", would you like to see it?

I am so happy that I am the proud new owner of lyrics that I wrote for a loved one killed in Afghanistan, called "Time Traveler". I now own the copyright, and I hope once it's composed and produced, that it will find its way to radio.

"Time Traveler" (copyright 2012)
(urban synth pop dance)


Traveling through time and through the reaches of the universe
Your presence remains in all our hearts
The love for you will last forever
Wilberto


We worked hard to create a perfect world
As the nations of man became unfurled
Breaking from a war full of conflict and strife
Our vision is now of color and life

Conquering all at hyper pace
Moving forward at light speed
Projecting throughout time and space
Highest standard to succeed


A brother remembered in love
Blazing fire in great extension
A true friend remembered in love
Time traveling in all dimension


Explore the cosmos, and control its great power
With the speed of light, you can slow down the hour
Soar through the heavens, and tell us what its like
Examine our thoughts, and describe the human psyche


You gave your life for us to be free
As you taught us what life's meant to be
I am happy to have met a person as you
As I admire what esteemed hero can do

A humble soul with high ability
Accepting all with much civility
You bring humanity up with much grace
And bond with love of different race


A brother remembered in love
Blazing fire in great extension
A true friend remembered in love
Time traveling in all dimension


Explore the cosmos, and control its great power
With the speed of light, you can slow down the hour
Soar through the heavens, and tell us what its like
Examine our thoughts, and describe the human psyche


Soldier defending vowed
Always remembered in love
Shining knight standing proud
Always remembered in love

Always remembered in love
Always remembered in love

(break/electronic build)


Farer time and space in flight
Jetting at the speed of light

Explore the cosmos, and control its great power
With the speed of light, you can slow down the hour
Soar through the heavens, and tell us what its like
Examine our thoughts, and describe the human psyche

Explore the cosmos, and control its great power
With the speed if light, you can slow down the hour
Soar through the heavens, and tell us what its like
Examine our thoughts, and describe the human psyche

Question: How do you like? Do you think its radio worthy?

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BlueSaphire

Asked by BlueSaphire at 9:55 PM on Feb. 10, 2012 in Hobbies & Crafts

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  • First, I am so sorry for your loss and thank your loved one and his/your family for his service and sacrifice.

    I love the way that you honor and memorialize your LO in these lyrics. Can't wait to hear it put to music. Good luck!
    doodlebopfan

    Answer by doodlebopfan at 11:31 PM on Feb. 10, 2012

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  • I like it- would like to hear it with music : )

    as for radio play- it isn't about sex or a why don't you love me when I love you type of song so...I don't know-though I'd like to see more stuff with better lyrics being played for sure
    charlotsomtimes

    Answer by charlotsomtimes at 11:55 PM on Feb. 10, 2012

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  • I think you did a great job with it. I love that you could put your heart into the lyrics. I would love to hear it set to music. I wouldn't be able to make a guess about the radio till I heard it. It isn't all about the lyrics sometimes. I wish you the best of luck with it.
    kmath

    Answer by kmath at 1:07 AM on Feb. 11, 2012

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  • Nice.
    brieri

    Answer by brieri at 1:27 AM on Feb. 19, 2012

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  • It's lovely. Thank you for sharing it with us.
    dragonfly750

    Answer by dragonfly750 at 7:19 PM on Feb. 21, 2012

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