I'm not a poet but thought I would try my hand at writing a poem for my SO for our 3 yr anniversary. I know it needs improvement and there are a few things that I'm not happy with. Thoughts?
The first time I met you, I knew we had something unique.
The first date, I wanted to last for at least a week.
The first time you put your arms around me, I knew that’s where I fit in.
Yes, these last three years have been full of first times for me. To begin
My first country music concert, my first hockey game
My first night at Country USA, my first time at *** County Fair (What a shame)
Let’s not forget the first times we have shared
Remember the first time we made hamburgers? Or were they meat balls? Not that I cared.
And who can forget the first time we planted an “eating kind of” plant. Alas
While I’m looking forward to many more firsts with you, I want you to be my last
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