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Sending out quick cover letter, anyone want to proof read, point out glaring errors, give suggestions...thanks

job is receptionist for design firm
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I am very interested in the position you posted for receptionist. The expected duties fit my skill set very well. With years of experience working in publishing, newspapers and advertising, I am well versed in the daily activities in a professional, yet creative office environment.

Not only have I designed corporate logos, business cards, brochures, annual reports, posters, calendars, books, and greeting cards, but also have experience with quality control and color correction with printers, photo editing, cataloging thousands of original slides, photographer contracts and contact person with an array of international photographers.

I have experience in both PC and MAC design programs. Enclosed is my resume, which will further detail my basic qualifications for this position.

If you would like more information, or would like to set up an interview, please contact me at 555-555-5555. I very much look forward to hearing from you.


Sincerely,

Jane Bancock

 
fiatpax

Asked by fiatpax at 4:56 PM on Dec. 23, 2013 in Just for Fun

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Answers (3)
  • Second paragraph, "Not only I have..." might be better to say "Not only have I..."

    I'd hire you!! GL
    Nimue930

    Answer by Nimue930 at 4:59 PM on Dec. 23, 2013

  • thank you
    fixed

    any other blatant errors?
    fiatpax

    Comment by fiatpax (original poster) at 5:02 PM on Dec. 23, 2013

  • Not only I have designed corporate logos

    ^^^Take out "not only"

    Then start a new sentence (remove "but also") I have experience...

    Last paragraph, I also have experience w/ .....

    The rest is great. I hope you get the job. GL!!
    mrsmom110

    Answer by mrsmom110 at 5:05 PM on Dec. 23, 2013

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