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A little bed time story...

There once was aboy name Johnny Harper. He was a sad little boy. One day he found a lepercaun. It's name was Charlie, he asked the little boy "Why are you so sad." The boy said "I'm such a good boy and do every thing right, but my luck is always bad." Charlie felt bad for the little boy, and said "I will change your luck to good, but however if you judge some one else, and have flaws your self you will pay ten fold." Johnny said that's ok I never judge. I'm as perfect as they come so I can't put others down." The leprecaun said "Ok." The next day was the best day of Johnnys' life. He got an A on his test, the girl in school Sara who was the prettiest girl he's ever seen said she would be his girl friend. Yes life was good for Johnny. Two days later on the way to school Johnny saw this kid from school named Timmy. Now Timmy was the school out cast. He had two moms, one smoked, and one always drank. They were poor.
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hot-mama86

Asked by hot-mama86 at 2:04 AM on Mar. 26, 2009 in Just for Fun

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Answers (9)
  • she made it up by her self it is really good story it has a lot of meaning she is a very smart young lady the story was the best i have read in along time
    michellesp

    Answer by michellesp at 6:19 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • wheres the rest?
    Anonymous

    Answer by Anonymous at 2:08 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • They live with his grandma who had a ton of cats and dogs. His clothes smelt simple awefull. Timmy said "Hi Johnny." Every morning except the last three. Johnny has been able to avoid him. Johnny saw Sara walking up as well as her brother. Johnny so badly wanted to impress her brother. Saras' brother jack then started being very hateful to Timmy then looked at Johnny so he said, "Ya he's right you are trash you were most likely born in a dumpster." Timmy ran away crying all he wanted was to be friends with Johnny. Jack gave Johnny a high five and him and Sara left. Just than Charlie showed up and said "What did I say about judging?" Johnny replied," But I have no flaws." "Oh no." Says Charlie. " You just gave your self a flaw no matter how good you were before. It's bad to judge," Just than Johnny woke up in his bed. He thought it was a dream. He went down stairs and asked his mom "wheres dad?"
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    hot-mama86

    Answer by hot-mama86 at 2:15 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • Hot we are waiting for the rest of the story.
    Gigi1969

    Answer by Gigi1969 at 2:15 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • She replied, "Don't you remeber we are devorced." Johnny thought to himself what. He figured it was a joke. He left for school and on the way there saw Sara. So he started walking to her. She walked away and straight over to a boy who Johnny didn't know. So he walked up and asked," Who is this?" Sara said "My boy friend Timmy." Johnny said," I thought I was your boy friend." " In your dreams." Johnny sat and the curb thinking when he heard a familar voice say," What's the matter little boy." He looked and there was Charlie. He said " Go away leave me alone you ruined my life." Charlie replied "No I didn't you had a gift. As with any gift comes responsibility."

    I know this sounds strange It's my 13 yr old cousins literature assignment and she asked me to get opinions
    hot-mama86

    Answer by hot-mama86 at 2:23 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • Sorry for taking so long!!!
    hot-mama86

    Answer by hot-mama86 at 2:24 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • pretty good.
    Anonymous

    Answer by Anonymous at 2:25 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • I thought so to, but she says I'm just being nice cause I'm family.
    hot-mama86

    Answer by hot-mama86 at 2:27 AM on Mar. 26, 2009

  • That was deep, and interesting. I know how hard it is to type all of that when LIMITED TO 1000 characters! I swear CM needs to stop moving simple things around and investigate if they can add more character capacity!!!!
    Gigi1969

    Answer by Gigi1969 at 2:43 AM on Mar. 26, 2009