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poetry review. What do you think?

All the nights spent waiting. Emotinally empty, like a peirced shell. Rejected. Worked beside you. Carried your child inside me. 5 years of sacrifice for what? While i lie waiting, my belly growing, moving, you lie. Tell me you love me while telling her, and her, and her. We will be ok, she will be ok. The angel from your hell.

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Anonymous

Asked by Anonymous at 5:54 PM on May. 30, 2009 in Just for Fun

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  • I think it sounds like a woman scorned...badly and possibly abused. I wouldnt call it poetry, but I would call it a very deep inner pain written on paper. Poetry usually has some level of order to it. If these are your thoughts...then I am very sorry for your pain and for whomever hurt you.
    momofsaee

    Answer by momofsaee at 8:00 PM on Jun. 3, 2009

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