I know it's got some pretty depressing content, and it's going to have to be split up into two posts, so be sure to read both..but what do you think? If you don't like the content, think more as far as writing scheme, meter and wording
Thanks! BTW, I'm not suicidal and any anonymous ridiculously angry posts will be deleted, say what you like, but do so honestly.
BTW, no, I'm not suicidal!
Death is not my enemy.
Days are passing, each as plain as the last.
Youthful skin, embroidered with silk, losing it’s sheen.
I can see my eyes darken, a shadow of who I was for such a brief time;
A shadow of who I should’ve been forever.
Twists and turns in my hair, fall limp and ragged, my laughter has left me.
Answer by gabrielle_x at 11:56 PM on Aug. 16, 2009
Answer by Anonymous at 11:59 PM on Aug. 16, 2009
Answer by ItsMeGigi69 at 12:00 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
Answer by vintagesnow at 12:02 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
No anonymous, because I've posted in several places and it was published at my school. If someone tried to have them copyrighted all I would need to do is show the transcript from me posting this or any poem I've written online and they could get a serious plagiarism charge.
Answer by gabrielle_x at 12:03 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
Answer by theutilitarian at 12:05 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
Answer by gabrielle_x at 12:06 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
Answer by Anonymous at 8:15 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
Answer by gabrielle_x at 9:13 AM on Aug. 17, 2009
Answer by Anonymous at 10:23 AM on Aug. 17, 2009