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What do you think of this?

Morning Gift

It's early morning when I hear a sound,
I arouse from my sleep and look around.
A flash of light with a distant rumble,
I arose to my feet with a stumble.
Wipe the sleep from my tired eyes,
A sound of rain drops were to my surprise.
I pour some coffee into my cup,
Go to the front porch and sup.
Southern summers are odd indeed,
But this rain is just what we need.
So peaceful and serene,
Now the air smells so clean.
A gental rain, nothing more,
As my attention is brought to the door.
A little voice with sleepy eyes,
Come to see this Godly surprise.
Come sit and watch with me,
The rain drops falling through the tree.
Her little hands hold on to mine,
When in the distance I see the sunshine.
The rain starts to go away,
Replaced by the sun's embrace.
Mommy it's beautiful do you see?
A colorful rainbow just for me.
Yes I do

 
luvmygrlz

Asked by luvmygrlz at 4:36 PM on Aug. 27, 2009 in Just for Fun

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Answers (4)
  • I think the actual end is (should be) the last line of the first post, "yes I do"

    After that is is just reciting a lesson. But having said this, it is touching and very sweet, and I am glad that I read it.
    Bmat

    Answer by Bmat at 4:41 PM on Aug. 27, 2009

  • you keep switching from present to past tense so its a bit difficult
    Anonymous

    Answer by Anonymous at 4:39 PM on Aug. 27, 2009

  • I think it's very sweet.
    geminisummerz

    Answer by geminisummerz at 4:42 PM on Aug. 27, 2009

  • I see what you are saying Bmat that sounds really good and it's like we are just enjoying the site and smiling as I say "yes I do" wow thanks.
    luvmygrlz

    Answer by luvmygrlz at 4:45 PM on Aug. 27, 2009

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