can i get your opinions on a poem i wrote?

a beautiful angel
too soon gone
she was here on a loan
but called back home
a life too short
nobody knows why
left behind are her mother and father to cry
it doesnt make sense and there is no reason
why this beautiful angel was called back to heaven.
so many lives she touched
so many hearts are broke
because in our hearts, we all held hope.
but she went home to the Father above, where she will forever be surrounded by love
she is now running and playing, laughing and smiling
no more hurt and no more crying
mom and dad are here to wait, until the day they can see her face.
until that day, she will be around
and up in heaven smiling down
so think of her often and remember when
until the day you are together again

This makes me so sad. A beautiful poem. I am sorry for your pain.

ITs beautiful and very sad. I hope it helps you move on!!

i have not a lost a child but every day mothers do lose their babys. this is for them. thanks so much ladies :)

my husband and i lost our son five months ago, this is a really nice poem

pretti poem... do u have more??