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*poem i wanted to share...kind of sad*

i wanted to share this poem with everyone. i wrote it last night and wanted to get your opinions on it. i have not lost a child but many mothers have and thats why i wrote it. what do you think? please be honest

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Asked by SThompson21 at 10:49 PM on Sep. 19, 2009 in Just for Fun

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  • a beautiful angel
    too soon gone
    she was here on a loan
    but called back home
    a life too short
    nobody knows why
    left behind are her mother and father to cry
    it doesnt make sense and there is no reason
    why this beautiful angel was called back to heaven.
    so many lives she touched
    so many hearts are broke
    because in our hearts, we all held hope.
    but she went home to the Father above, where she will forever be surrounded by love
    she is now running and playing, laughing and smiling
    no more hurt and no more crying
    mom and dad are here to wait, until the day they can see her face.
    until that day, she will be around
    and up in heaven smiling down
    so think of her often and remember when
    until the day you are together again

    Answer by SThompson21 at 10:50 PM on Sep. 19, 2009

  • That's super sweet and touching.

    Answer by PaceMyself at 10:56 PM on Sep. 19, 2009

  • aww that made me want to cry

    Answer by auroura at 10:59 PM on Sep. 19, 2009

  • thats sweet:) i love poetry.

    Answer by naturepeace at 11:02 PM on Sep. 19, 2009

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