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I added a poem to a journal on here and would really love some feedback...

http://www.cafemom.com/journals/read/1588419/Just_a_Thought_Poem_about_suicide

If you dont' mind, I would really appreciate some feedback1
That is the link. Thanks ladies!

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Anonymous

Asked by Anonymous at 10:00 PM on Apr. 5, 2010 in Just for Fun

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  • I like it! DId a true story spark the poem? Did a real friend commit suicide?
    Anonymous

    Answer by Anonymous at 10:03 PM on Apr. 5, 2010

  • Yes. It was 7 years ago, and I wrote this right after. I haven't had the courage, or have been ready, to share it until now, though.
    Anonymous

    Answer by Anonymous at 10:40 PM on Apr. 5, 2010

  • Good, I think that it could use a little work but very good, To me it read almost more like a short story than a poem but I did enjoy it good luck.
    Sarahedger

    Answer by Sarahedger at 3:25 AM on Apr. 6, 2010

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