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Will you take a look at my website and tell me what you think?

I am good at proof reading other people's work but when it comes to my own- I suck at it. If you don't mind, will you take a look at it and let me know if there are any typo's. Also, let me know what you think about the website- Is the design good, the prices fair, etc.?

Thanks in Advance!
Link Below.

 
JeremysMom

Asked by JeremysMom at 12:26 AM on Jul. 18, 2010 in Money & Work

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Answers (6)
  • under your services, you have a lot of capitalization, like each word of a sentence, it's visually distacting, and I believe not technically correct. However, I like the layout, and the colors, and your prices seem very reasonable.
    lovinangels

    Answer by lovinangels at 12:30 AM on Jul. 18, 2010

  • JeremysMom

    Comment by JeremysMom (original poster) at 12:26 AM on Jul. 18, 2010

  • Thank you. I had meant to go back and correct that, but forgot to.
    JeremysMom

    Comment by JeremysMom (original poster) at 12:32 AM on Jul. 18, 2010

  • It looks good, very reasonable prices. Aside from what lovinangels already mentioned, everything else looks great. Awesome job!
    Kiwismommy19

    Answer by Kiwismommy19 at 12:34 AM on Jul. 18, 2010

  • I agree with lovinangels, but everything else looks good!
    Ashlynnsmommy07

    Answer by Ashlynnsmommy07 at 12:50 AM on Jul. 18, 2010

  • I agree there's too much capitalization, but you ARE supposed to capitalize the first word of every sentence:-)

    For example: Grocery Shopping... should be Grocery shopping...
    the_kimmers

    Answer by the_kimmers at 6:58 AM on Jul. 18, 2010

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