This is a friends poem, she's needs feed back. I don't know what to tell her and she wants to send it in. What do you think. Please be nice... :) Thanks
Your walk towards me in perfect light.
Our eyes met and lock so tight.
As our soul's slowly emerge as one.
Then shall our lips have passionate fun.
Intense the moment grows
minute by minute.
Our hearts begin to slowly beat
as hands reach out and meet.
Lost in one another's eye's.
Passion grows and burns inside.
Bodies touch in rhythmic motion.
Just like waves amongst the ocean.
Our lips and our tongues become one now
feeling lost and heaven bound.
Candles surround us as do rose petals
watching our selves on the thorns and nettles.
Pulsing, tugging, sounds of sighs.
Makes wondering neighbors say oh my.
We relax and pause
Asked by Anonymous at 11:49 AM on Jul. 20, 2010 in Crazy for Credits
Answer by surfcitymom at 12:18 PM on Jul. 20, 2010
Answer by salexander at 12:14 PM on Jul. 20, 2010
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