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There runs the river ~ running through,
with shades of brown and muddied hue,
old as old ~ and bending long ~
beguiled by Nature's sweetened song.


Reverie in spring's delight,
now fill the river's lonely sight ~
with warming rays of sunshine gold,
beaming on the waters cold.


Spring turns into the warmth of June,
as the river flows to summer's tune ~
beneath a silvered moon's respite,
upon a breathless summer's night.


Too soon, the river nods its head,
to sleep a dream within its bed ~
when seasons change, and autumn bares-
its leaves to rest in slumber's care.


Alas, the graying days appear.
Cold now hovers ~ ever near,
to freeze the river's running now,
as winter takes its chilly bow.


Old as old ~ and bending long ~
asleep within a winter's song,
with shades of b

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raynikki14

Asked by raynikki14 at 5:14 AM on Oct. 4, 2008 in Just for Fun

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  • Very nice but it cut it off at the end. You have talent. I'd like to read the rest of it.
    luvmygrlz

    Answer by luvmygrlz at 8:52 AM on Oct. 4, 2008

  • yes, its very good. I like it!!
    drowninginboys

    Answer by drowninginboys at 11:03 AM on Oct. 4, 2008

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