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What do you think?

I wanted to test out some of my poems, so let me know what you think of this one & maybe I'll post other ones later. Oh & give criticism if you feel it's needed...Thanks!!


Thinking bout this too much
Is gonna make me not wanna touch
You ever again
Wish we could just start again
Don't really know how this'll pan out
Wandering my brain are all these doubts
Can't control my thoughts
If you could ever read my mind, oh, the onslaught
Of shit you'd hear
How can I be fair with all I fear
That will come out of this...
Could the answer really just be a kiss?

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Asked by Anonymous at 11:09 PM on Aug. 19, 2010 in Just for Fun

Answers (1)
  • It says so much. I think it is very good. Keep writing. Share your writing with people you trust.

    Answer by tootoobusy at 4:17 AM on Aug. 20, 2010

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