I just finished my first blog . I would appreciate it if you can tell me what you think, and if I left any thing out. I have to send it to my friend tomorrow. Thanks in advance for any assistance.
So how is it?
Answer by SabrinaMBowen at 5:53 PM on Aug. 30, 2010
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Answer by van5 at 6:12 PM on Aug. 30, 2010
Really not being rude here, but do you have someone who can edit your writing? The first paragraph has 4 grammatical errors. Not to mention representing opinion as fact. I don't think you really understand the use of colons and commas. I have to admit to stopping about halfway down the blog because the writing doesn't draw you in. It reads like an owners manual or a really boring history book! Maybe you should cut it up into several blogs so you don't lose people. I do think you are limiting your audience become you come off as very anti Christian and seem to almost be condescending.
Answer by Anonymous at 6:26 PM on Aug. 30, 2010
Answer by gertie41 at 6:42 PM on Aug. 30, 2010
Do tell. What of my original statement was untrue or rude? She asked for opinions. I critiqued. Forgive me, next time this particular person asks for advice on personal works I wont respond. I didn't realize she was looking for ardent ass kissing.
Answer by Anonymous at 7:17 PM on Aug. 30, 2010
Answer by lovinangels at 10:26 PM on Aug. 30, 2010
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