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Is this any good? Please be honest even if you hate it.

Every song makes me think of you

Every star makes me wish for you

You consume my thoughts and every breath I breathe

I want you even though I don't need you

You could be my everything

But would I be your anything?

Every song makes me think of you but do I ever cross your mind?

 
Anonymous

Asked by Anonymous at 12:49 AM on Sep. 6, 2010 in Just for Fun

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Answers (12)
  • I think it's cute. It seems to really express how you feel and that is what matters. Writing is so good for the soul.
    hsmominky

    Answer by hsmominky at 12:56 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • Not Bad :)
    mommy_of_two388

    Answer by mommy_of_two388 at 12:51 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • I like it.
    ceallaigh

    Answer by ceallaigh at 12:51 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • Pretty good.
    bubsiclesmom

    Answer by bubsiclesmom at 12:53 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • Not bad..
    Izsarejman

    Answer by Izsarejman at 12:54 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • Not bad...keep workin on it!

    mom-de-uno

    Answer by mom-de-uno at 12:56 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • I like it!
    beyondhopes

    Answer by beyondhopes at 1:02 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • I like it too. Good job. :)
    thatgirl70

    Answer by thatgirl70 at 1:05 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • like it, short and sweet and too the heart of it.
    xxhazeldovexx

    Answer by xxhazeldovexx at 1:31 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • I like it. If you were a friend of mine asking for advice and help improving, I would point out a couple of minor things that could be slightly altered to aid in the flow and appearance of it, but I like it as it is also. On a scale of 1-10, I would give it an 8, possibly an 8.5.
    Mrs.BAT

    Answer by Mrs.BAT at 2:54 AM on Sep. 6, 2010