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Okay, I used to write alot back when I was younger, but just recently started back up.. Still trying to "get my groove back" Lol! ..Just wondering what you guys think of this, honesty appreciated, thanks ladies. :)

So long to the long, lonely nights.
Where I wished you were by my side.
So long to the warm, secure times
Where you held me closely all night.

This roller coaster seems never resting.
These feelings will not change.
We knew it was love, my dear.
But somehow we let it slip away.

These memories I will hold closely.
And cherish at every chance I get.
And when I am long gone and lonesome.
I will strive to never forget.

I am thankful for everything.
The knowledge I have gained.
The love I thought I could never know..
Has vastly slipped away.

Just out of reach,
Knowing I have stretched myself far beyond my means.
I have always tried,

 
Anonymous

Asked by Anonymous at 1:07 AM on Sep. 6, 2010 in Just for Fun

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Answers (4)
  • 8 (out of 1-10, 1 being bad)
    xxhazeldovexx

    Answer by xxhazeldovexx at 1:30 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • I have always tried, my love.
    I have always tried.
    ***
    Anonymous

    Comment by Anonymous (original poster) at 1:08 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • 1-10 with "1" being not good and "10" being really great, 7.5 or an 8. Take that as a high compliment coming from me lol. I'm a very critical writer, both of my own work and the work of others. Congratulations on picking up a pen again (or tapping keys again lol). I've been struggling with horrid writers block for nearly two years now, and I'm very frustrated with it because writing is one of my passions.
    Mrs.BAT

    Answer by Mrs.BAT at 2:38 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

  • 8
    ambie5805

    Answer by ambie5805 at 4:02 AM on Sep. 6, 2010

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