Please tell me your honest opinion of these poems? Thanks!
So long to the long, lonely nights.
Where I wished you were by my side.
So long to the warm, secure times
Where you held me closely all night.
This roller coaster seems never resting.
These feelings will not change.
We knew it was love, my dear.
But somehow we let it slip away.
These memories I will hold closely.
And cherish at every chance I get.
And when I am long gone and lonesome.
I will strive to never forget.
I am thankful for everything.
The knowledge I have gained.
The love I thought I could never know..
Has vastly slipped away.
Just out of reach,
Knowing I have stretched myself far beyond my means.
I have always tried, my love.
I have always tried.
Asked by Anonymous at 12:06 PM on Nov. 17, 2010 in Just for Fun
I like them! keep it up! :)
Answer by kiansmom0423 at 12:15 PM on Nov. 17, 2010
Answer by SweetLuci at 12:42 PM on Nov. 17, 2010
Answer by Airamana at 12:48 PM on Nov. 17, 2010
Answer by tasches at 12:58 PM on Nov. 17, 2010
Answer by Shines3 at 2:10 PM on Nov. 17, 2010