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How does this sound? (scrapbooking)

Trying to finish up this page for DD 1st bday & Im trying to decide if i like the journaling or not & if it flows/sounds good..
Please let me know what you think. Thanks!
"Your 1st birthday party was at home on Oct 27th, 2007. We invited over close family & friends to help with your big celebration but on the day of the party you decided to take a late nap & slept through most of your party! Thankfully you woke up in time enjoy the cake & presents. You got your own cake to smash into but instead decided to daintily pick at the icing. It was a wonderful, blessed day for all of us because we are very blessed to have you in our lifes! "

 
Anonymous

Asked by Anonymous at 3:18 PM on Nov. 20, 2010 in Toddlers (1-2)

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Answers (2)
  • I think what you wrote was great and now just add some photos or even a napkin from the party.
    momindiana

    Answer by momindiana at 3:21 PM on Nov. 20, 2010

  • It sounds totally form the heart! It doesn't need to 'flow' it just needs to be heart felt.
    But_Mommie

    Answer by But_Mommie at 3:21 PM on Nov. 20, 2010