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hi, please help me on this..

I have written the following email to the visa office can you please add to this to make it more professional and in good english?


Hi,

Hope you are doing good.
I am just wondering what is the current status of application#23456. If you need further information, please let me know.

Thanks & regards,

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Asifa

Asked by Asifa at 2:46 AM on Jan. 12, 2011 in Money & Work

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Answers (4)
  • The English is ok except it should be"Hope you are doing well"
    SweetLoveofMine

    Answer by SweetLoveofMine at 2:48 AM on Jan. 12, 2011

  • LIndaClement answered this on your last question and it's perfect!!
    Regarding: Visa Application reference # __________

    I am writing to request the current status of the visa application for Mr/Mrs. ThingyBoss, dated Month ##, Year.

    I need to confirm that everything necessary has been included and nothing was accidentally omitted.

    Thank you,

    signed by the boss
    Aquarius80

    Answer by Aquarius80 at 2:53 AM on Jan. 12, 2011

  • What aquarius said. You don't ask how someone is doing in a business letter.
    Candi1024

    Answer by Candi1024 at 10:06 AM on Jan. 12, 2011

  • Look up business letters on line.
    grismelda

    Answer by grismelda at 3:07 PM on Jan. 13, 2011

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