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Whats the correct words to use when writing a sex book? adult content

i will show my face and not use the anon button because i dont want you to think im a man or some sort of perv or troll (although some pple call out "troll" and dont use it correctly lol)

anyway, as stated im writing a book where there's sex and ive been using the correct terms such as vagina, penis, breasts and so on. but when the heat is on, it doesnt sound right. such as "she saw his big hard penis grow more and more." ok so my REAL question is this...and i do need an answer to what terms do you usually use in a book if not usually penis, vagina, breast, ect.

ive been using the word suckle a lot. now the dictionary meaning is....

a. To cause or allow to take milk at the breast or udder; nurse.
b. To take milk at the breast or udder of.
2. To take in as sustenance; have as nourishment.
3. To nourish as if with the milk of the breast; nurture

i dont have anybody suckling breasts to give out milk in my story so would that be the wrong term? should i go with "suck" instead?

 
americansugar80

Asked by americansugar80 at 10:03 AM on Feb. 17, 2011 in Relationships

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  • how about..."cut the night short, climbed on Abby and entered her, stoking her between her legs, feeling the warmth of her moist insides..." it's suggestive, but leaves it up to the imagination?

    good luck, love the post, it's fun!
    boobarandbell

    Answer by boobarandbell at 11:18 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • You could say, he "nibbled" on her breasts ....

    And how about ... his "throbbing manhood" -- lol

    Good luck!
    BaileysMom476

    Answer by BaileysMom476 at 10:06 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • http://www.cafemom.com/answers/734361/Want_to_hear_about_a_stupid_book_made_for_women_on_pleasing_a_man

    sorry, i don't know how to post it to make it a direct link. but i read a sex book last week, and made a post about it. you might want to read it and the answers, maybe that will help you? If in the least, it may amuse you.
    boobarandbell

    Answer by boobarandbell at 10:08 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • LOL! Great Question :) I have read many romance novels...and youre right..noone says "peni" in them! haha!
    eek! I almost find it hard to even type the words! I blush when I just read them! lol
    other words for penis:
    cock
    shaft
    love stick(lol)
    Pleasure maker
    growing hardness
    manhood
    shlong
    (ok..kids are starting to fight, I can't think anymore,lol)

    instead of suckle:
    licking
    sucking
    eating
    tasting
    kissing
    fondling with tongue

    I know theres tons more..I just can't think right now!

    Good Luck on your book!!! :)
    kimberlyinberea

    Answer by kimberlyinberea at 10:12 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • ok thanks! and many more welcome to comment...boobarandbell : i remember when you posted that i even made a comment under the link you gave me of yours!!
    americansugar80

    Comment by americansugar80 (original poster) at 10:19 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • we would really have to know how you plan on using the word
    shay1130

    Answer by shay1130 at 10:23 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • and kimberlyimberea...mine have off of school tommorow so i will love that lol i will feel your pain!
    americansugar80

    Comment by americansugar80 (original poster) at 10:33 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • Here is one sentence that needs to be fixed...

    cut the night short and got on top of Abby to insert his penis into her and stroked her vagina that way,
    americansugar80

    Comment by americansugar80 (original poster) at 10:44 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • Mmm, erotica! LOL that's the name of what you're describing. Anyway, join the Erotica group on cm and you'll see plenty of ideas!
    Anonymous

    Answer by Anonymous at 11:53 AM on Feb. 17, 2011

  • oh thats good word description boobarandbell!!!!

    i have joined a group but idk if i'll stick with it.
    americansugar80

    Comment by americansugar80 (original poster) at 12:40 PM on Feb. 17, 2011