I can not fgure out how I want to word this or who my audience is. Well my general audience is the class but who specifically I am trying to reach is where I have the trouble.
I am writing a paper on discrimination in the workplace - natural hair for african american women. I want to know do african american women face pressure to conform to an anglo hairstyle (chemically process, heat straighten, wigs/weaves) or are they free enough to wear their hair natural? Also is there a difference in the job (white collar vs non white collar jobs).
1. How can I shrink that wording down to something more streamline?
2. I don't know f I should use the job status as part of the title or include it in the body.
3. My audience I don't know if I am writing this paper for people who are considering going natural or not.
(Nautral hair for AA women - chemically free, weaveless, and no wigs. They are wearing the hair that God gave them)
The class is Business Communication and hte teacher said the genral audience is the class but we should have a target audience we are writing this for. I am not asking anyone to write my paper just some helpful insight that I may be missing.
Asked by Jazmineamomma at 2:55 PM on May. 29, 2011 inLevel 18 (5,231 Credits)
Answer by NotPanicking at 3:20 PM on May. 29, 2011
Answer by momof030404 at 3:27 PM on May. 29, 2011
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