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I have had a couple of job hunt support groups over the years, though this is my first virtual one. One of the first things that we do is review and critique each others' resumes.  If you are interested, we can do this here, too.  Please let me know what you think!


Robin in Chicago

by on Apr. 18, 2009 at 7:54 PM
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by on Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:15 PM

Hey, I'm working on a version.  Might take me a day or two, but will post something soon.

by on Aug. 7, 2011 at 8:46 AM

Can someone please review my resume - For some reason spacing and capital letters are missing or added but on my original resume it does not look like this. Thanks so much for your time and help

Tiffany plew



To obtain a position with a well established organization with a stable environment that will lead to a lasting relationship with this organization.


Work of experience


March 2011 - Present    Fresenius Medical Care Knox County Kidney Center, Mount Vernon, Ohio

Dialysis Technician

•Ÿ  Setup and operation of Hemodialysis machines

•Ÿ  Provide patient care and patient education

•Ÿ  Report all activities and observations to the team leader

•Ÿ  Monitor patient treatments

•Ÿ  Document all care provided and observations on Proton or paper charting

•Ÿ  Collect blood samples



June 2005 - December 2008   Diamond View Residential Mansfield, Ohio

Resident Assistant

•Ÿ  Work with mentally disabled and mentally challenged adults.

•Ÿ  As member of a 2-4 person team, provide complete Activities of Daily Living (ADL) assistance for  residents

•Ÿ  Supervise behavior of residents, also supervise staff and residents on weekends

•Ÿ  Ensure all residents receive proper meals, medication, hygiene and basic care.

•Ÿ  Report all activities to following shift supervisor.

•Ÿ  Keep files up-to-date (e.g., progress reports, vital signs house notes and individual progress notes, file paperwork.)

•Ÿ  Answer phone calls

•Ÿ  Manage call offs

Ÿ  Train new employees

February 2007 - June 2007 A to Z Mansfield, Ohio

Home Health Aid

•Ÿ  Visited individuals home

•Ÿ  Assist with ADL's

•Ÿ  Run errands


July 2005 - June 2006 Friend Home Mansfield, Ohio

Direct Care Giver

•Ÿ  Performed housekeeping tasks and cook meals.

•Ÿ  Assisted with bath/shower,

Ÿ  Cared for four MRDD women

•Ÿ  Maintained up-to-date progress notes to guide treatment


Prior to 2005

I worked in restaurant, retail, and customer service.





September 2011 Mount Vernon Nazarene University

•Ÿ  Will begin the Bachelor of Social Work program

2010 - 2011 University of Phoenix Axia

•Ÿ  Associate of Arts with a Concentration in Human Services Management degree obtained June 2011


2002 - 2008 North Central State College Mansfield, Ohio


•Ÿ  All prerequisites are completed

Ÿ  First two quarters of clinical experience completed




      American Heart Association

Ÿ  Healthcare Provider CPR and AED Expires 04/2013


                                       Ohio Board of Nursing

Ÿ  TC1 - Temporary Dialysis Certificate1 Expires 09/21/2012


by Robin in Chicago on Aug. 9, 2011 at 8:44 PM

Hi Tiffany, 

I am swamped right now; I will try to find some time over the weekend to give you some ideas for your resume

Robin in Chicago

by on Aug. 17, 2011 at 11:11 PM

I don't have mine on this comp but would love it looked over

by on Oct. 12, 2011 at 7:38 AM

Yes I would be interested.

Thank You

by Robin in Chicago on Oct. 13, 2011 at 9:52 AM

Quoting tazmidgiefairy:

I don't have mine on this comp but would love it looked over

Do you have your resume in your sent email? Feel free to copy and paste it. We are looking at content, not format

by Robin in Chicago on Oct. 13, 2011 at 9:52 AM

Quoting tina454542:

Yes I would be interested.

Thank You

Feel free to create a new post with your resume

Robin in Chicago

by on Apr. 14, 2012 at 12:07 AM

I would love that!

by Robin in Chicago on Apr. 14, 2012 at 6:15 AM
1 mom liked this

Quoting KimmisMom:

I would love that!

Go ahead and create a post with your resume, or send me your resume as a message!

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