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Build a story

Posted by on Jul. 24, 2008 at 3:33 PM
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I figured we could play a game where we all work together to write our own stories...once one finishes we can start on a new one.

add as much as you like to the story and then the next person will add more =)

Posted by on Jul. 24, 2008 at 3:33 PM
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Octobersmom
by Group Owner on Jul. 24, 2008 at 3:33 PM

A lone figure stood behind a tree not quite visible despite the morning sun which shown on the dew like diamonds.

Nakor21
by on Jul. 24, 2008 at 5:00 PM

The figure was waiting. It wouldn't be long befoer the sun was up and the dew would shine like a path of diamonds. Then she could move and find a place to rest til  evening.

Have a great day!!!! 

 

       Erin                       Caleb                     Jesse                   Zakary

  

uptonmama
by Member on Jul. 24, 2008 at 5:07 PM

A lone man walks past her hiding place causing her to step further into the sparce cover provided by the large maple.  She can not afford to be spotted now.  Ten more minutes and she can make her move.  She must find her cover before the road becomes more populated. 

Her shoulders sag as her body cries out for rest.  It has been to long since she last took refuge.  The small cave should not be far now.  Craving the dark coolness it will provide she watches carefully for  her chance to escape unnoticed.

harrypottermom
by on Jul. 24, 2008 at 5:50 PM

As he walk by he hears a noise behind the tree, he walks to find the noise hoping for a small animal for him to cook. She syas to herself he must not see me. She relaxes her body, her eyes roll back in her head, and at that moment the lone stranger changes his mind, being taken over by a sense of fear he has never felt before. He walks brisky down the path.

Tessa1983
by Member on Jul. 24, 2008 at 5:57 PM

At his departure, she breathes a sigh of relief, and straightens, determined to reach her shelter before the sun goes any higher in the bright sky.

 


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I am lost and have gone to look for myself. If I should return before I get back, please ask me to wait.

uptonmama
by Member on Jul. 25, 2008 at 4:44 PM

Darting across the road she is alert to any possible witnesses.  She takes cover in a ravine just past the road and races toward her refuge, her safe haven.

Tessa1983
by Member on Jul. 25, 2008 at 4:57 PM

Finally, after what seems like days, though it was in reality, perhaps half an hour, she reaches the small cavern. She sinks down inside, succumbing to exhaustion.

 


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I am lost and have gone to look for myself. If I should return before I get back, please ask me to wait.

Anothermom500
by on Jul. 27, 2008 at 11:39 PM

That was one breath too close for comfort she thought. If they find me I will surely lose my head. A feeling of dread swept over her exhausted body.

bncurry
by New Member on Aug. 1, 2008 at 12:53 PM

How did it get this bad, normally she is so careful, so discreet, how did she get so out of hand. It started a week ago when she had ran into him again. The one man that she had always called friend had now turned into her worse nightmare.  They had grown up together always together they knew each other inside and out they had been the closest of friends, true friends, until they night they were turned.  Now they are the fiercest of enemies because she hunts their master and he protects their master. As she sat in her dark cave hoping that no one had followed her she knew that the next night would bring sorrow and tragedy for one of them but which one she did not know. She moved deeper into her cave where her make shift room was and climbed under her covers for sleep, a long much needed sleep.

harrypottermom
by on Aug. 13, 2008 at 12:37 AM

A few hours later, she awoke to the sound of footprints carefully and slowly approaching her  safe haven. No it can't be how did he find me? I was certain I was careful that I made it look like I was heading in the opposite direction. "You can't hide from me. We are connected you and I, that's something we can never change."  "What do you want?" I asked suspiciously. 

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