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Need Title suggestions :)

Posted by on Aug. 31, 2010 at 8:30 PM
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Ok..  just popped this out..  now I need some help, I suck at titles...


Darkness dances in shadow

against intracate wings of dew.

Whispering winds scatter liquid silver

amoungst smouldering branches.

Delicate hands bathe the ground,

radiating golden light.

Deep within comes the song of life,

rising from one voice, becoming many.

A sea beating against ashen destruction,

breathing life into a barren land.

Tears rain down like mother's milk,

as life begins anew.


Thoughts?


by on Aug. 31, 2010 at 8:30 PM
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amirsmomi
by *Head Admin*Aspiring on Sep. 1, 2010 at 12:27 PM

 Darkness. Or Out of Darkness? I will have to think a lil further.This is a hard one.lol

sheri305
by Aspiring writer on Sep. 2, 2010 at 11:05 AM


Quoting amirsmomi:

 Darkness. Or Out of Darkness? I will have to think a lil further.This is a hard one.lol


sheri305
by Aspiring writer on Sep. 2, 2010 at 11:11 AM

So it sound like when the world was created,something being born,or something like that.So maybe "The begininning","Still Birth","Another beginning","New Exsitence",or "whelped",which is just another name for born.

I like this post,good exercise.

AspieMel
by on Sep. 9, 2010 at 10:15 PM

Out of Darkness is a good one.. Hmm... Thinking Out of Ashes as well.. not sure yet.. 

 

Sheri - very close.   was going for rebirth after destruction... :)  

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