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Critique, if you have a moment, please?

Posted by on Oct. 10, 2012 at 7:46 PM
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Other than lip gloss being desperately lacking (wearing make up in these from now on!), what are some areas I can improve? I am learning as I go about editing processes and such. I am fine with brutal honesty. I want to make these information videos easier on the eyes, so people can really learn from them. I don't want the to be distract by technical considerations or something about me, that is fixable. If you see anything, from a crafting/technical/artistic/sound tech/photography/wardrobe/etc aspect, please let me know, so I can do better! : ) 

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rhiannonaisling
by Melanie on Oct. 10, 2012 at 11:17 PM

 I might put up either a different colored background or wear something darker against a white background. Otherwise, very good.

louzannalady
by on Oct. 11, 2012 at 12:17 AM

Perfect! Thank you! : ) Do you think standing up would be better or that the subject matter is more of a "sit-down" kind of subject? 

Quoting rhiannonaisling:

 I might put up either a different colored background or wear something darker against a white background. Otherwise, very good.


Kathy112761
by Kathy on Oct. 11, 2012 at 4:18 AM
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Looks great, but I think a different color background would be better. I also think that you sitting down is fine.

ripemango
by Member on Oct. 11, 2012 at 4:22 AM
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i think you would come off as more commanding standing in the vid...it affects the placement of your shoulders and how you speak.

 i don't know if you were wanting other advice but I think a bob haircut right past your chin would be really cute on you!


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BdayBByWish
by on Oct. 11, 2012 at 4:30 AM
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I would iron the background lol sorry my eyes just went straight towards the wrinkles lol, i think maybe having a spot light towards the background only would make it look nice :) kinda soften it up a bit and yeah like the other lady's said maybe a contrasting shirt
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louzannalady
by on Oct. 11, 2012 at 10:29 AM

Thanks! : ) 

Quoting Kathy112761:

Looks great, but I think a different color background would be better. I also think that you sitting down is fine.


louzannalady
by on Oct. 11, 2012 at 10:29 AM

Thanks! : ) 

Quoting ripemango:

i think you would come off as more commanding standing in the vid...it affects the placement of your shoulders and how you speak.

 i don't know if you were wanting other advice but I think a bob haircut right past your chin would be really cute on you!


louzannalady
by on Oct. 11, 2012 at 10:30 AM

Thanks! : ) 

Quoting BdayBByWish:

I would iron the background lol sorry my eyes just went straight towards the wrinkles lol, i think maybe having a spot light towards the background only would make it look nice :) kinda soften it up a bit and yeah like the other lady's said maybe a contrasting shirt


rhiannonaisling
by Melanie on Oct. 11, 2012 at 10:37 AM
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 Sitting down is fine

Quoting louzannalady:

Perfect! Thank you! : ) Do you think standing up would be better or that the subject matter is more of a "sit-down" kind of subject? 

Quoting rhiannonaisling:

 I might put up either a different colored background or wear something darker against a white background. Otherwise, very good.


 

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