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Ok ladies I'm being brave here...be gentle:)

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I am sharing with you a poem I wrote in highschool while I was still a virgin so it may be a bit juvenile:) Enjoy!

Prince of Dreams

Prince of Dreams journey to my heart,
Heal this wound that tears my world apart.
Guide me gently; though make it swift,
prevent the waves from sending me adrift.
Appease this throbbing, savory desire,
consume me with loves' ferver fire.

I wait for my Prince to carry me away,
searching for him at the end of a dying day.
Those eyes bind me forever in my dreams,
desolate nights suspened by radiant moonbeams.
Rapscallion and brigand he may be,
trapped in his embrace I will never flee.

United forever we strive,
battling uncertainties, fighting to survive.
Our love, a valiant test,
proclaimed by a lovers' steadfast conquest.
A love that will always exist,
even the coldest of hearts could never resist.
E.J.
So hope it wasn't too corny I was sixteen when I wrote this and was an avid reader of romance novels, can you tell:)

by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 12:44 PM
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JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Thank you. Reading all those romances growing up made me want to save myself for my one true love.
Some may not think it smart to put your hopes and expectations is something as a belief that I want that hero, but I can think no other way.

I want love not just sex. So I waited for my prince who came into my life with a single note that said I'm new here could use a friend and that he was a sucker for a pretty face.

My hero is just a man; my tarnished knight.
But I love him and I"ll take him, for he gives my world light:)

Thank you for the positive feedback:)


Quoting Megzboys:

  That was wonderful!   Being sixteen and feeling that like was awesome.   Pure thoughts from an unjaded mind.    True love is not wasted on the very young, it is wasted on the worldly jaded people who can't even see love when it is right in front of them.   


JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 7:02 PM

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JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 7:02 PM

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JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:28 PM

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jojo_star
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 8:31 PM

I like it. 

CherryAddict
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 9:30 PM

very nice

mdawn028
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 10:21 PM
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That is beautiful darlin' you are really good at writing poems sincerely hugs Dawna
JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 25, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Thank you that was really sweet of you to say:)


Quoting mdawn028:

That is beautiful darlin' you are really good at writing poems sincerely hugs Dawna

JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 26, 2013 at 12:06 AM

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JJsmommy4evr
by on Apr. 26, 2013 at 12:13 AM

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