my dd was on her facebook in the living room reading something one of her friends shared on her wall, so i ask whats shes reading and if i could read it with her (shes 15 and we do get along great so i wasnt snooping the thing she was reading looked interesting) we get to the last paragraph and it gets nasty, about some guy kicking in someones face and blood shooting up his pant leg, and a girl being thrown against a tree.i asked her whos set this story to her she said one of my friends from school then i asked where her friend got it from and she doesnt know...i dont know what to think...who would come up with things like that?
this is the last part of the story
she hears crashing through the underbrush as the group chases them down the hill Brailey grabbing onto the twins hands and drake being dragged by Bliss the blue techno twin, out of no where someone jumps out and tackles Brailey into the dirt scraping her face along the rocks on the edge of the trail, she grabs on hard to his hair and throws him down the steep trail, him still holding onto her sweater pulling her with him. He lands hard against the ground making him lose his breath, she flips over him slamming into a tree, passing out and becoming in a sense a rag doll, Drake runs up to the guy who tackled Brailey and kicks him hard in the face breaking his nose and knocking teeth out blood gushed out up Drakes pant leg, the twins pick Brailey up and keep running down the hill, Drake close behind
update***i found out this story is from my dd's friends cousin (whos 19 i believe) and shes been writing things like this since 3rd grade, the friend is 11