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I always wanted to share these....

Anonymous
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My personal poems  I wrote when things got tough. I stopped seriously writing once I got into high school. After I had my daughter things go extremely rough so I wrote a few poems and just poured myself into them....


Poem #1

Slowly I slip into unconsciousness.
Maybe I drank too much or maybe my body is in dire need of food,
but I'm beginning to not care.
The darkness soothes me, giving me comfort.
The light slowly dims as my eyes roll back.
I hear the rain on this tin roof.
I hear my breathing become shallow.
I hear you telling me I took it too far.
Who knows, maybe I'm dying from a broken heart.
I feel the cold take over and I like the way it feels.
Finally, I feel beautiful.
Too bad it had to come to this.
Tell my mother I'm sorry,
I didn't mean to leave in such a hurry....
I just though I had some place to be.
The cigarette falls from my red lips.
I hear the sirens
I see the faint blue and red ribbons of light.
I feel their hands pulling at me
.......and i drift away.
Finally, I'm free.


Poem #2

You breathe a whisper into my ear
I can't make out what you say.
Tears drip from my cheeks
As you squeeze my hand with remorse.
The scent of your cologne lingers in the air
....long after you're gone.
My coffee sits by the bed,
but I'm too weak to reach it.
My soul is gone.
I grab the sheets as if we were making love.
A fist full of linen is all I have left to hold onto.
My mascara stains the pillow you once laid on.
As I gather my strength to sit up,
it reminds me of the pain.
I sit and stare
into the space you once occupied.
This body isn't strong enough
....to carry these burdens alone.


******PLEASE DO NOT STEAL THESE.****** These are MY personal poems I have been wanting to share with someone.....anyone just to get them out. I will be posting more poems more frequently. And yes, I will continue to stay anon. 

Posted by Anonymous on Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:06 AM
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Rose87
by on Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:08 AM
Beautiful!
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anfinley89
by on Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:23 AM

 I think these are wonderful :) great job!!

Ctink8189
by on Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:37 AM
These are great. I could feel the emotions you put into them as i was reading them.
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