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Need advice.......... what a B****

Anonymous
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 How can i word this better, I am not the best at this:

I find that when moving on 2 a new business adventure, you may have some fears about what it is you are about 2 do. The more you learn and talk to other people that helps build your confidence you need to move forward.

 

Something like that, hope you understand what i mean. TY

Posted by Anonymous on Feb. 18, 2013 at 1:49 PM
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Anonymous
by Anonymous - Original Poster on Feb. 18, 2013 at 1:54 PM

shrugging

Anonymous
by Anonymous - Original Poster on Feb. 18, 2013 at 1:59 PM

bad

RLT2
by on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:00 PM

I'm not sure what kind of advice, you're looking for

Anonymous
by Anonymous - Original Poster on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:01 PM

 to re-word it so it doesnt sound like a kid wrote it

Quoting RLT2:

I'm not sure what kind of advice, you're looking for

 

Mrs.wilcox01
by Gold Member on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Im confused


Quoting RLT2:

I'm not sure what kind of advice, you're looking for


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gwebkeijmmm
by Ruby Member on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Who is a bitch? I'm confused.
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Anonymous
by Anonymous on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:01 PM

Yes, I read it three times and I'm not sure what your question is...

KrissyKC
by Platinum Member on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:02 PM

2 = to

Anonymous
by Anonymous on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:02 PM
*scratches head
gwebkeijmmm
by Ruby Member on Feb. 18, 2013 at 2:02 PM
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Yes. Anything written with "2" instead of "to" or "too" sounds like a kid or lazy teen wrote it.

Quoting Anonymous:

 to re-word it so it doesnt sound like a kid wrote it


Quoting RLT2:


I'm not sure what kind of advice, you're looking for


 

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