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5 kids will die today most of them under 5 years old

Anonymous
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Question: first or second ending?

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first

second

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which ending is better?

first: There is no MYOB when it comes to kids they are our future they are every one's business.

second: Abuse is real every13 seconds a child is abused, 5 children will die today due to abuse and neglect. If every person in this room can save one child from being abused we as a class can save at least one life!

 Edit: I have a speech for a college course I'm in and the two statements above are how i want to end it. I just can't decide which one is better.

  yes the facts are real 1440 sec. a day=110.8abused kids a day (5 die)=1 in 22.2 die my class is roughly 20 23

 

  

if you need it here is my intro

 

•A.     Attention Device: (wait 13 seconds) While you were waiting for me to begin my speech another child was abused. (2)

•B.     Thesis: Abuse and Neglect has increased 134% since 1980, but we can help bring that number down.

•C.     Preview: I will tell you some myths vs. facts, what to look out for, and what you can do about it.

•D.     Credibility: I have been abused as a child, and I am working towards becoming a social worker for DYFS.

•E.      Relation: You can help save a life.

 

Posted by Anonymous on Feb. 28, 2013 at 9:37 AM
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Anonymous
by Anonymous 1 - Original Poster on Feb. 28, 2013 at 9:39 AM

bump

Anonymous
by Anonymous 1 - Original Poster on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:40 AM

bump anyone??

Anonymous
by Anonymous 1 - Original Poster on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:47 AM

new title please help

 

Anonymous
by Anonymous 2 on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:48 AM

i don't understand

mommy053008
by Silver Member on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:48 AM

voted

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Anonymous
by Anonymous 1 - Original Poster on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:52 AM

I am in college and doing a speech for my public speaking class. My topic is child abuse i was trying to see what the best way to end it was between the two statements.  


Quoting Anonymous:

i don't understand


 

fallenstars
by on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:54 AM
I'm confused on what wad first 2nd etc but I like this together


There is no MYOB when it comes to kids they are our future they are every one's business.

Abuse is real every13 seconds a child is abused, 5 children will die today due to abuse and neglect. If every person in this room can save one child from being abused we as a class can save at least one life!
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Anonymous
by Anonymous 1 - Original Poster on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:57 AM

thank you!! 


Quoting mommy053008:

voted


 

Anonymous
by Anonymous 1 - Original Poster on Feb. 28, 2013 at 10:59 AM

Wow i'm sorry i edited again lol i saw that was difficult to understand!

thanks i really didn't think of that but i can't use it together i might be able to say it but both statements together would be too long for my typed speach. lol I'm already having problems keeping it on one page and the conclusion is supposed to be just one sentence.  


Quoting fallenstars:

I'm confused on what wad first 2nd etc but I like this together


There is no MYOB when it comes to kids they are our future they are every one's business.

Abuse is real every 13 seconds a child is abused, 5 children will die today due to abuse and neglect. If every person in this room can save one child from being abused we as a class can save at least one life!


 

banana-bear
by on Feb. 28, 2013 at 11:02 AM
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