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Well I really don't have a website, I am just in it for fun at the moment but here is a taste of my poetry (which is not my strongest suit) for you guys to give me feedback on:
To see you again,
would be everything,
To hear your voice-amazing
Those whispered words
Spoken so long ago
Missed now more than anything
To die so young, though noble in the fight.
I will miss you, my hero my love, my valiant knight.
-I wrote it in memory of my high school sweetheart who was killed in Iraq 3 days before my daughter was born-I still really love/loved him.
Everything for you
That's how this song will go
No matter how I feel
No matter what I know.
Stuck in this hell
The never ending show
Just go away and let me be
For my answer remains "no"
-This one is written because of my hubby
Princess Erin,
You took my breath away
the day they placed you with me
If I could relive that moment
Believe me that I would
You reach me with your smile
though we are separated these many miles.
Mommy loves you, always will
So let come what may you'll be in my heart forever
And back in my arms soon.
-Written for the hell I am going through right now usually I take time to make it flow smoothly but I just put down on paper what I felt at that moment.

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I'd love feedback. Skhye
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