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What is a good and short poem to give to my mom?

Posted by on May. 5, 2013 at 11:26 AM
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We have always had a rocky relationship, even though we do not get along (like she does things I do not like, and I hate her) I have appreciated some of the things she has done for me. Like, take me and my son in while I finish school. Is there a poem I could use as I am going to personalize a gift for her for mother's day.


Also, I have a limit of 6 lines, 34 characters per line


Ok, So I gave it a try.

How does this sound?

We may not always get along, we have fought, argued, and bickered.

However, I just want you to know I appreciate everything that you have done for me and I love you.

Happy Mother's Day.

by on May. 5, 2013 at 11:26 AM
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k9l1c5
by Ruby Member on May. 5, 2013 at 1:02 PM

You could write a haiku, those are only 3 lines. 5 syllables for the first line, 7 syllables the 2nd line and 5 syllables the 3rd line.

MomofKJI
by on May. 5, 2013 at 2:12 PM

Although we never see eye to eye

You were there for me

when it just wasn't me

And for that we say

Thank you on this

Happy Mother's Day

I hope that helps. Just thought it up right now. If you want to change it or not use it its up to you but sometimes writing something yourself can get through beter then a poem that you find. No matter the relationship with your mom cause trust mine is rocky as well. Again I hoped this helped

 

 

belloanima
by on May. 5, 2013 at 4:42 PM

BUMP!

k9l1c5
by Ruby Member on May. 5, 2013 at 5:58 PM

I think your poem is fine and I'm sure she will love whatever you decide to give to her :)

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