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Beginning of a new story by SurgarPuff Nov. 2, 2009 at 4:22 PM	3	Nov. 3, 2009 at 5:12 PM by SurgarPuff
The Cosmology of Jane (a poem) by Janiepie Nov. 1, 2009 at 11:13 PM	0	Be the first to reply to this post. »
Melyssa Grant, part 2 (I can't get the full current manuscript up.) by debra_benge Oct. 29, 2009 at 10:23 AM	0	Be the first to reply to this post. »
Melyssa Grant (untitled as of yet, just going by name of main character) by debra_benge Oct. 27, 2009 at 10:33 AM	2	Oct. 29, 2009 at 9:28 AM by g.force
Assassin's Seduction - Chapter 4 by KittyMallory Jul. 14, 2009 at 5:52 PM	4	Oct. 26, 2009 at 11:59 PM by Dani41780
The very end by Celtic_Dragon Aug. 15, 2009 at 1:57 AM	3	Oct. 13, 2009 at 5:48 PM by newgs08
Secrets of a Father by Parksey27 Sep. 16, 2009 at 3:20 PM	2	Sep. 17, 2009 at 3:32 PM by caljones
Read a Scene and Tell Me What You Think! by peacejoylove Jul. 18, 2009 at 7:29 PM	2	Aug. 27, 2009 at 3:09 PM by peacejoylove
Finished Part Two of 'The Criminal'...anyone care to critique? by MinstrelMommy Aug. 21, 2009 at 1:21 AM	1	Aug. 21, 2009 at 10:57 AM by MinstrelMommy
You've Forgotten by Kendras_Mommy Aug. 12, 2009 at 3:47 AM	0	Be the first to reply to this post. »
It has been exposed, here's the Mystery! by Godstar Aug. 7, 2009 at 10:00 AM	1	Aug. 10, 2009 at 12:30 PM by caljones
War- a poem by unbrokenhellmus Aug. 3, 2009 at 10:07 PM	2	Aug. 8, 2009 at 6:26 PM by unbrokenhellmus
Neverland (Poem/Song) by sophiafarris Aug. 1, 2009 at 1:09 AM	3	Aug. 7, 2009 at 5:16 PM by Angel_Eyes_23
In the Course of Fifteen Years by Liese Aug. 4, 2009 at 2:02 AM	1	Aug. 5, 2009 at 5:15 PM by Piscean
Untitled Poem by sophiafarris Jul. 23, 2009 at 11:53 PM	2	Aug. 3, 2009 at 2:04 PM by entrepreneuHER
A Long road to somewhere Chapter 1 by kaylajean86 Jul. 12, 2009 at 8:04 AM	5	Jul. 26, 2009 at 11:57 PM by ceemuhreeashbee
Anyone care to read/critique my short story? by MinstrelMommy Jul. 16, 2009 at 5:47 PM	0	Be the first to reply to this post. »
Bruises by Celtic_Dragon May. 30, 2009 at 6:27 PM	5	Jul. 15, 2009 at 5:29 PM by Celtic_Dragon
a brief scene from my new novel by peacejoylove Jul. 14, 2009 at 1:48 PM	3	Jul. 15, 2009 at 3:03 PM by LCSHELTON
Never Say Die ;) by clearwater Mar. 27, 2009 at 3:33 AM	4	Jul. 15, 2009 at 12:40 PM by peacejoylove

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