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The Cosmology of Jane (a poem)

Posted by on Nov. 1, 2009 at 11:13 PM
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this is my first sharing with this group as I am a little paranoid about sharing my poetry outside of my immediate circle.  But I would honestly like feedback.  Since I'm new, please include positives and negatives (not just negatives).  Whew...thanks!

The Cosmology of Jane

the cloud of witnesses

opens its arms wide

to the presence of Jane.

Jane runs to them at last

resting in their tender

compassion.

knowing the celebration

is just beginning as

the guest of honor has

arrived.

she feels the hospitality of

joy, frankincense, and the

heartbeat of the cosmos

stirring as all raise a glass

of living water.

     Salud!

 

(c) 2009, T. Stewart

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