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[Proudbirthmom06]

 Kalia was lying on the bed in nothing but her robe. She had her arm slung over her eyes to block out the light. Her legs were open, revealing to anyone who would look that secret spot between her legs. She was waiting for him; she could hear him coming up the stairs. Her breath came in short spurts and the closer to her bedroom he got, the hotter she felt. He didn't bother with pleasantries when he entered her bedroom, just flung open the door, took off his clothes, and shut off the light. He immediately crossed to where she was lying on the bed and promptly removed her robe. Without hesitation he pressed a hand to that wetness between her thighs. She moaned and opened her legs to give him easier access. Pleased, he stroked her, slowly at first and then speeding up as she began to heat up under his touch. He could feel her getting wetter and hotter as he continued to drive her mad with his fingers. He slid a finger inside of her and just feeling the muscles of her tighten around it nearly undid him. He dropped to his knees and replaced his fingers with his mouth, flicking her softly with his tongue and then pulling her skin between his lips and sucking on her.

"Please," she whimpered, "I can't take it anymore. I need you inside me now!" "Not so fast, my love," he murmured. He slid his tongue inside her, knowing he was teasing her but wanting the sensation to last. Upon hearing her whimper again, he stood and wrapped her legs around his waist. Slowly he slid inside her and nearly exploded on the spot. "You're so soft Kalia, so very soft and sweet." As he leaned down to kiss her mouth, he slowly began sliding in and out of her, fully aware of the limited time they had together. She looked into his eyes as he began to speed up his thrusts, trying desperately to hold back until he had fully pleasured her. "I wish you could stay," she murmured softly, knowing it could never happen. He was only hers for a moment at a time. She gave him a little squeeze as he thrusted inside her deeper and with a guttural groan of pleasure he sped up. Faster and deeper in each time, and then he slid a finger in between their bodies. He stroked her once and that easily she came, a mass of shuddering, mind blowing spasms. As her pleasure took her, he let go inside her, matching his moans with hers as the pleasure took them higher than they had ever been. When finally the shuddering spasms subsided, he fell over her and kissed her softly on the lips. "I wish I could stay with you, too, Kalia. But your people and my people are from two different worlds." She reached up to stroke his cheek. "I know, Langley, I know." He smiled at her, an idea suddenly taking root in his mind. "There is only one way we could ever be together, completely forever," he said. "How?," she whispered. Leaning down to her ear he murmured softly, "Let me make you."

**This story is about a girl named Kalia. She has been left alone by her family and considered an outcast in her town. No one pays much attention to her but one man-Langley. He falls in love with her the instant their eyes meet and he knows they are destined to be together forever. There is only one problem-He's a vampire. I haven't yet come up with a title, to be honest this just came to me tonight. But if you could help me with a title I would greatly appreciate it. Also, I would like feedback on the story itself. thanks in advance.**

[wvcoffeechick]

hmmmmmmmmm...well...my husband and i read your story over our morning coffee-whew!!! what a sunday morning read-lol:) How about Two Worlds Collide? it's not bad so far-a little racey -it sounds more like the middle than the beginning...very  hot though:) Good luck:)