My first post in a long time! :)

Untitled for now...

My life was dark and lonely
my hope and dreams had all died
til the day your love found me
then, my tears began to dry

What I found in you was true
renewed faith and my best friend
my life I want to give you
to be your dream that won't end

Nothing in life is promised
we only have how we feel
too many moments we've missed
to share a love that's so real

So, now I stand before you
wearing my heart on my sleeve
hoping you'll let me love you
and, save us both from this grief

Feedback is welcomed...Considering instead of "dream that won't end" putting "dream without end" let me hear your opinions on that and anything else you think may improve the piece...thanks ~Jenny