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Losing the battle to breast cancer poem

Posted by on Nov. 29, 2009 at 7:34 AM
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Veiling Angel

Her body infected

Her soul undeterred

Her spirit erected

Her strength was forward

From the moment she knew

She lived every day

Facing the challenge

Never turning away

The agony hidden

Behind smiling eyes

She swallowed her fears

And forth put her pride

Her pain was unseen

Much like her tears

Savoring the memories

Of prior years

She hoped all along

Her body would last

She'd return to normal

Not live in the past

She didn't seem worried

Her eyes couldn't lie

She fought back her fury

Relinquished her pride

Concealed her symptoms

Her wings were disguised

Her eyes told a story

Her heart had to hide

Her laughter still sings here

Her stories are told

Her children regret

The time that was stole

Her heart was not heavy

Her love was reflected

Her body had been

Yet her soul; not dissected

Her imprint was left here

Her wings must have shed

We weren't meant to keep her

She was an angel instead.

In Memory of

Jana J. Foust

 

~Katey Kalvaitis

Posted by on Nov. 29, 2009 at 7:34 AM
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qwietpleez
by Crystal, Group Owner on Dec. 2, 2009 at 9:38 PM

This was so beautiful . . . it gave me goosebumps and a few tears. Beautiful tribute you have penned. 

lydiennesmom
by Member on Dec. 13, 2009 at 2:10 AM

Thank you... We miss her so bad.

Baps
by Group Admin on Mar. 9, 2010 at 12:59 AM

Awesome.... The words touched my heart.

Thank you for sharing with us. ~Pamela

SinaiJ
by Member on Mar. 27, 2010 at 2:19 AM

The time that was stole

Do you mean stolen? I just wanted to let you know inscase it was an error :) It's a very beautiful and touching poem :)

lydiennesmom
by Member on Jun. 21, 2010 at 4:27 PM

I realize the correct use of the word stole in this case would be "stolen," but it didn't rhyme... I guess it would (kind of but not really) be a false rhyme.

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