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Posted by on Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:31 PM
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I'm sure I'll modify this 100 times.. This just came to me, so I thought I'd share :)

 

I'll scar my wrists with your love,

As my mind burns with the thought of you.....

Forever, but then again... never.

 

Apparently today was emo day.... Heh.

by on Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:31 PM
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TiaraMom19
by on Dec. 4, 2010 at 6:41 AM

 Hi,this was deep....but in a way scary deep.I hope youre not a cutter??....no guy is worth that.

My version:)

Ill hold your memory in my heart forever,As my heart cools with the thought of you,This is for now...who knows where love will take me.....

 

Blessings,Tia

SinaiJ
by Member on Dec. 4, 2010 at 12:01 PM

 

Quoting TiaraMom19:

 Hi,this was deep....but in a way scary deep.I hope youre not a cutter??....no guy is worth that.

My version:)

Ill hold your memory in my heart forever,As my heart cools with the thought of you,This is for now...who knows where love will take me.....

 

Blessings,Tia

 

Oh no, not a cutter. My writing tends to be more on the dark side. It's always been that way really. I found a poem from 8th grade, which I'll have to post sometime, that was about marriage. It had a rather sad ending to it. So my work's pretty much always been this way. Even when it's positive, it always has a bit of a pessimistic side lol I liked the way you worded it as well.

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