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[SinaiJ]

I'm sure I'll modify this 100 times.. This just came to me, so I thought I'd share :)

 

I'll scar my wrists with your love,

As my mind burns with the thought of you.....

Forever, but then again... never.

 

Apparently today was emo day.... Heh.

[TiaraMom19]

 Hi,this was deep....but in a way scary deep.I hope youre not a cutter??....no guy is worth that.

My version:)

Ill hold your memory in my heart forever,As my heart cools with the thought of you,This is for now...who knows where love will take me.....

 

Blessings,Tia

[SinaiJ]

 

Quoting TiaraMom19:

 Hi,this was deep....but in a way scary deep.I hope youre not a cutter??....no guy is worth that.

My version:)

Ill hold your memory in my heart forever,As my heart cools with the thought of you,This is for now...who knows where love will take me.....

 

Blessings,Tia

 

Oh no, not a cutter. My writing tends to be more on the dark side. It's always been that way really. I found a poem from 8th grade, which I'll have to post sometime, that was about marriage. It had a rather sad ending to it. So my work's pretty much always been this way. Even when it's positive, it always has a bit of a pessimistic side lol I liked the way you worded it as well.