Promises Broken

[BonitaM]

I feel more like crying

With every hiddend smile

And I feel more like dying

Than living this life at all

All of the promises broken

And all of the things it's cost

Are just another token

Of the love we've lost

We want to be together

But we don't know how

We said it would be forever

Still it's not working out

Sometimes it's too hard to pretend

That everything is alright

And I have nothing left to defend

Except maybe my pride

I feel more like crying

With every hidden smile

And I feel more like dying

Than living this life at all

All of the promises broken

And all of the things it's cost

Are just another token

Of the love we've lost

I don't want to hear your lies

Don't want to forgive and forget

You've broken all of our ties

And hurting's all I'll ever get

I miss you more than you can imagine

Loving you is all I've ever wanted

But baby you ain't changin'

And I don't want to be taken forgranted

All of the promises broken

And all of the things it's cost

Are just another token

Of the love we've lost

[qwietpleez]

Another beautiful peice . . . flowed nicely too, not too choppy. Keeping a good rhyme scheme can be tough . . . nice job :o)

[BonitaM]

Thank you :o)

[JudyMarie]

Its so hard to swallow that pain

or wrap it up and don't disdain.

Shove it all in a tattered purse

Take it away on a speedy hearse.

Only to find one nostalgic day

Its in your closet, won't go away.

You open it up when you find the key.

Then cry again, you're just like me!

[SinaiJ]

Flowed quite nicely, but you might want to check spelling and format more. That wasn't meant as mean, just so you know, just trying to be helpful :o)