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Promises Broken

Posted by on Mar. 21, 2011 at 10:58 AM
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I feel more like crying


With every hiddend smile


And I feel more like dying


Than living this life at all


All of the promises broken


And all of the things it's cost


Are just another token


Of the love we've lost


We want to be together


But we don't know how


We said it would be forever


Still it's not working out


Sometimes it's too hard to pretend


That everything is alright


And I have nothing left to defend


Except maybe my pride


I feel more like crying


With every hidden smile


And I feel more like dying


Than living this life at all


All of the promises broken


And all of the things it's cost


Are just another token


Of the love we've lost


I don't want to hear your lies


Don't want to forgive and forget


You've broken all of our ties


And hurting's all I'll ever get


I miss you more than you can imagine


Loving you is all I've ever wanted


But baby you ain't changin'


And I don't want to be taken forgranted


All of the promises broken


And all of the things it's cost


Are just another token


Of the love we've lost

by on Mar. 21, 2011 at 10:58 AM
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qwietpleez
by Crystal, Group Owner on Mar. 24, 2011 at 10:57 AM

Another beautiful peice . . . flowed nicely too, not too choppy. Keeping a good rhyme scheme can be tough . . . nice job :o)

BonitaM
by Member on Mar. 24, 2011 at 3:15 PM

Thank you :o)

JudyMarie
by Member on Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:56 PM

Its so hard to swallow that pain

or wrap it up and don't disdain.

Shove it all in a tattered purse

Take it away on a speedy hearse.

Only to find one nostalgic day

Its in your closet, won't go away.

You open it up when you find the key.

Then cry again, you're just like me!

SinaiJ
by Member on Apr. 18, 2011 at 10:54 AM

Flowed quite nicely, but you might want to check spelling and format more. That wasn't meant as mean, just so you know, just trying to be helpful :o)

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