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Untitled wee thing I wrote.

Posted by on Feb. 3, 2013 at 5:45 PM
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Make it sting.

Make it hurt.

Make me feel everything that I can't.


Make things bad,

Make it good.

Make the world fall around me,

Light and dark surrounds me.


I am lost.

I am found.

I am everything that went down with the sinking ship.


Dreams burn.

Houses fade.

People never remain.


Don't know if I'm 100% satisfied with it but I am for now. Just a wee little poem or song lyrics I wrote, haven't decided which.

by on Feb. 3, 2013 at 5:45 PM
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qwietpleez
by Crystal, Group Owner on Mar. 16, 2013 at 10:35 PM

I think I have felt this before . . . I think they would make great song lyrics.


SinaiJ
by Member on Apr. 12, 2013 at 2:23 AM

 

Quoting qwietpleez:

I think I have felt this before . . . I think they would make great song lyrics.


Thanks very much :o)

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