New Poem-"Dream" What Do You Think?

[outerbanxmom]

                   ~Dream~
Though awake, I close my eyes
and begin to dream......
He is there again,
to envelope me in loving arms,
and bring me peace and passion.
To make me feel his love
course through my every vein.
His kiss breathes life
into my empty soul.
The loving gaze of his sea-green eyes
intoxicates me, leaving me weak.
His lips catch mine in a kiss
so warm, so deep,
it leaves me speechless, senseless, breathless,
as if our  souls have reached out
and cling to one another,
united in passion.
I open my eyes to look into his,
and he is gone.
But in my heart he remains.
My Soulmate.
                                          Elaine Moore
                                             03/14/08

[qwietpleez]

I think it sounds like a wonderful dream ~ This is one of those pieces you can bring to life by giving each word breath, adding subtle details of sight and sound and touch . . . let your reader feel what you are feeling in the telling of it. 

It is beautiful as it is of course as your words always are :o)

Everyone should find such passion . . .

Hugs & prayers ~ Crystal

Speak with your heart and I will hear you . . .

[Baps]

I agree with you Crystal. I really enjoyed this. It made me yearn for such passion.