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What do you think of this poem?

Posted by on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:27 AM
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I AM SHE

when the passion has faded

and politeness has diminshed into hatred and disdaining charm

there is a peace you must find within yourself

to get up in the morning

to hope for more

to feel less

so it won't hurt so bad

sometimes you will crack

sometimes you will break

but pick the pieces up

and know if there is nothing else

there is the most important thing

me

even in moments of righteous silence

I have me

the rest I don't need

just me

you can never have me

you can never take me

from me

I am she

she who is proud

she who has genius like tendencies

beautiful

and gifted artisticly

so I will take a brush

and dab some paint

paint over you and your demeaning tone

paint it over

again

and again

and again

you will not take me

I AM SHE


~disclaimer~ I did not write this.


by on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:27 AM
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Replies (1-7):
Moonglimmer
by on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:29 AM

I found it to rambling.

BubbaLuva
by on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:36 AM

 I don't care for it.

carterscutie85
by *Shanny's Stalker* on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:37 AM

I loved it

carterscutie85
by *Shanny's Stalker* on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:41 AM

BUMP!

MamaTasha08
by on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:42 AM

I like it.

Sandy418
by Platinum Member on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:43 AM

didn't like it

carterscutie85
by *Shanny's Stalker* on Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:44 AM

BUMP!

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