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A poem I wrote for my son on his graduation day tell me what you think!

Posted by on May. 20, 2013 at 8:50 AM
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I literally just wrote this out 15 mins ago!

 

 

 

 

 

You Are

You are my life

My dream,

My drive,

My being.

You are my happiness

My chance,

My weakness,

My dance.

You are my hope

My inspiration,

My cope,

My creation.

You are my only

My one,

My certianty,

My Son.

 

(certainty does not seem to be spelled right to me! Please tell me honestly what you think of this!)

by on May. 20, 2013 at 8:50 AM
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momdoes
by Platinum Member on May. 20, 2013 at 6:46 PM

BUMP!

momdoes
by Platinum Member on May. 21, 2013 at 8:14 AM

BUMP!

Pixiemaid
by Bronze Member on May. 21, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Like it
aidensmomma508
by Wendy on May. 21, 2013 at 8:37 AM

Nice

Alwaysmotivated
by Bronze Member on May. 21, 2013 at 8:57 AM

Love it!

boys2men2soon
by Silver Member on May. 21, 2013 at 9:58 AM

it is sweet.




Jambo4
by Silver Member on May. 21, 2013 at 10:15 AM

As a mom who is having her firstborn son graduate on Saturday.... lovely.

I have tears.

Hugs  Amber

Jambo4
by Silver Member on May. 21, 2013 at 10:17 AM

maybe take out the "my certianty" and put 
"and eternally"

(then it just blends in that he will always be your son and all the above) 

RADmomma
by Gold Member on May. 21, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Good job.
RADmomma
by Gold Member on May. 21, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Good job.
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