my poems... add your too if you want.... no bashing...
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Question: how do you think these are I was 14 when I wrote them so think about them from a 14 yr old writing age.
Total Votes: 13
Depression
It hurts so bad to want to die,
Not even realize why,
It hurts so bad that words cannot explain,
This endless deep, deep pain,
I just need to scream and cry,
You people look at me and see,
The person I want to be,
Trying to hide my pain and shame,
The feelings no one sees
I try to talk to share my feelings,
But the words just don't see to be there,
I want to people to comprehend,
The pain that words cannot send
Copyright ©2009 Jaimee Marissa Bighouse
Time
Time stands still,
Anticipation burns within,
Waiting for the moment,
I've been longing to find,
A need to hold you near,
With nothing left to fear,
A shiver down my spine,
When our lips meet from yours to mine,
Passion and desire to let it all go,
But I know its not the time,
So I hold back,
I tell myself no,
When I see you I melt,
My chest starts burning,
As you get closer it only gets stronger,
Knowing you have to leave,
I refuse to believe
Jaimee Bighouse
Copyright ©2009 Jaimee Bighouse
I voted both good. I have quite a few from when I was 15-20 and now I can't write one if I tried!! I think at those ages our emotions are so strong and confusing. I think as adults we need to realize that teens go thru all these feelings and not to think they are nuts! But to try to remember when we felt just as confused! Every day was so intense back then! And now... it's one day into another of laundry and dishes and bills and work and those wonderful cuddles in between. How did you copywrite them? I'd love to share mine too...... even tho they may be childish!! :)
share them here. and you can copywriete them at poetry.com
Quoting mysweetJBs:I voted both good. I have quite a few from when I was 15-20 and now I can't write one if I tried!! I think at those ages our emotions are so strong and confusing. I think as adults we need to realize that teens go thru all these feelings and not to think they are nuts! But to try to remember when we felt just as confused! Every day was so intense back then! And now... it's one day into another of laundry and dishes and bills and work and those wonderful cuddles in between. How did you copywrite them? I'd love to share mine too...... even tho they may be childish!! :)
Mommy Kissed it Better
This is dedicated to the parents and families of cancer patients
When you fell and skinned your knee,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you dropped out of your tree,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you cried, scared of the dark,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you got lost in the park,
Mommy kissed you better.
When they took you for those tests,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When it hurt so bad you couldn't rest,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When you cried, scared of death,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When you gasped and fought for breath,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When your soul went to it's home,
Mommy knew you felt better.
When mommy cries next to your stone,
You reach down and kiss her better.
Christina Maria Rowe
Copyright ©2007 Christina Maria Rowe
you made me cry.. that was soo touching..
Quoting hannies_momma:Mommy Kissed it Better
This is dedicated to the parents and families of cancer patients
When you fell and skinned your knee,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you dropped out of your tree,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you cried, scared of the dark,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you got lost in the park,
Mommy kissed you better.
When they took you for those tests,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When it hurt so bad you couldn't rest,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When you cried, scared of death,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When you gasped and fought for breath,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When your soul went to it's home,
Mommy knew you felt better.
When mommy cries next to your stone,
You reach down and kiss her better.Christina Maria Rowe
Copyright ©2007 Christina Maria Rowe
Thank You, it makes me cry too, and I am the one who wrote it......
Quoting lillitigator88:
you made me cry.. that was soo touching..
Quoting hannies_momma:
Mommy Kissed it Better
This is dedicated to the parents and families of cancer patients
When you fell and skinned your knee,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you dropped out of your tree,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you cried, scared of the dark,
Mommy kissed you better.
When you got lost in the park,
Mommy kissed you better.
When they took you for those tests,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When it hurt so bad you couldn't rest,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When you cried, scared of death,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When you gasped and fought for breath,
Mommy tried to kiss you better.
When your soul went to it's home,
Mommy knew you felt better.
When mommy cries next to your stone,
You reach down and kiss her better.Christina Maria Rowe
Copyright ©2007 Christina Maria Rowe
i voted both
and here a some of mine from when i was in high school...sorry they are kinda morrbid
Why Me
I was only four
When I opened the door
When I was raped
And I felt all this hate
He thought he was slicker
But yet I thought I could be quicker
I didn't want to get caught
Because I thought it would be my fault
I would never show my pain
Even though it drove me insane
I matured much faster
You would never see the same laughter
These tears that I cried, I cried inside
I hid my feelings past my willing
Why did this happen to me
Why couldn't I have just been free
Why should I live in this hell
Close my eyes, crawl back into my shell
Where I stay hidden from hurt
Can't I just wash away the dirt
Laura Stoner
Hell
Evil thoughts pour through my head...
Telling me I should be dead...
When I wake in the early morn...
In the mirror myself I scorn...
A knife to my wrist I do take...
Not relizing I have yet to make a mistake...
Life so dim...
I know I have sinned...
Yet I have no need to care...
I have lived my life, seen my share...
Breath so thin, body so weak...
My life will end with only one blink...
My body lay limp, no longer bleeding...
Soon after that my heart stops beating...
It's getting warm...
I hear their morns...
Where I am I can't yet tell...
I look around, and now I see...
I'll burn in Hell...
For all eternity!!!
Laura Stoner
I feel so alone
The times they fly by
The air hard as stone
I try not to cry
But I never succeed
Because the look in your eyes
Tells exactly what I need
You don't think I need this
You don't think I'm worth it
Maybe if you looked harder
You would see past that shit
But nevertheless
I sit here at home
Waiting for those words
The ones so unknown
I cry to myself
Hiding from you
Scared to let you see me
Though maybe you knew
I don't want to be so alone
I miss when we used to get along
We used to be friends
But I guess I was wrong
It wouldn't last forever
Like nothing ever does
And though I try hard to get it back that way
I know I never could bring back what was
Even if I did manage
To get you to like me
I'd still never forgive you
For hating me like I'm some piece of debris
I hate you so much
But I can't make myself say it
I feel so worthless
Whenever you go for the hit
I feel like I'm worthless
I feel so alone
The times they fly by
The air hard as stone
Barefoot and Pregnant
Waddling
inflated balloon,
that's me,
my due date is soon.
Ankles are swollen
past recognition.
Sex drive long gone,
can't find the ignition.
Chest turned to melons,
when it used to be eggs.
Pains everywhere,
especially my legs.
Time goes by,
I just keep getting fatter.
Feeling like I
have a pea-sized bladder.
Mood swings, well,
that's a vast understatement.
Feel like I'm dying,
but I'm only just pregnant.
Christina Maria Rowe
Copyright ©2007 Christina Maria Rowe
I love them both, momma, but my favorite is Time. Here is one that I wrote after the Virginia Tech shooting.
Everyday Survival
- Among the rusted roofs
- Of the penthouses;
- Among the green
- Of the maple trees;
- Hate reigns supreme.
- The God of Abraham,
- The God of Moses,
- The God of Jesus
- Is buried below
- The smoke and haze;
- The veil that became
- Normalcy. Daily destruction,
- Abandoned war zones, rambling
- Idiots. Out with the old
- And in the with new, but
- The burning Bush remains the same.
- Shot ring out among
- A campus, dead faces
- Flash on the screen.
- Prophetic speechs of
- Fault, filling
- Hour with unkowns.
- How is a heart mended
- When it is destroyed, battered,
- Nothing to be found but
- Blood? The dead faces
- Of soliders, students, children
- Pry on the screen, blending
- Into mixed faces of a father,
- Mother, brother, sister,
- Future. Death becomes
- This society.
- The God of Jacob,
- The God of John,
- The God of Jesus,
- Is bloody and dead,
- Headless among those
- Who have died with
- His name on their lips.
- How is a mind fixed after
- It has been raped, violated,
- Sh*t on? F*ck the violators.
- F*ck the rapists. F*uck the
- System that puts them
- Among our children.
- The myth of
- The God of Matthew,
- The God of Luke,
- The God of Jesus,
- Is a blanket to
- Hide under. Wake up.
- There are no streets paved
- In gold. There is no
- Castle among the clouds.
- F*uck the God who put
- Us among the murderers, rapist,
- Thieves, liars.
- F*ck the person who started
- That lie. This is hell, striving
- For existence within daily life.
- Everyday survival
- -----------While pumping gas (F*uck the sniper)
- Everyday survival
- -----------While seeking shelter (F*ck you, Woody)
- Everyday survival
- ------------While working (F*ck the terrorists)
- Everday survival
- ------------While going to school (F*ck you, Harris, Klebold, Cho)
- Everday survival
- ------------While living (F*ck you, Yates, Dahmer, Bundy, Gacy, McVeigh.....)
- Everyday survival
- ------------While wading through sh*t (F*ck you, Jesus, Buddha, Ghandi, Bramha...)
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