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A Poem I wrote today (a song, actually)

Posted by on Jan. 25, 2009 at 2:01 AM
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"Persephone Defiled"

(1st verse)

Dance in the rain, oh merry maid
your destiny lies before you
dance in the sunset, maiden, mine
your childhood lies behind you
don’t you know, my maiden fair
your destiny lies beneath you
the earth is cold and filled with pain
it’s destiny’s within you


(chorus)
Do you not know, do you not know, do you not know
It’s your destiny
Do you not know, do you not know, how could you not know
you were meant for me

(2nd verse)

Dance in the forest, little nymph
moonlight beams upon you
hide from the darkness, little girl
it’s closing in around you
I take you in the forest
and then I take you down
I take you into darkness
I take you underground

(repeat chorus)

<bridge>
the sunset of your innocence
forsaken catalyst of strife
emerging from the abyss
as one, as man and wife

 

by on Jan. 25, 2009 at 2:01 AM
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lilmissscareall
by Group Owner on Jan. 27, 2009 at 6:30 PM

I am always open to critques. Let me know what you think.

GothicReverie
by New Member on Feb. 10, 2009 at 10:46 PM

I like it.  clapping

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