So I am taking a intro to communication class this summer and I am trying to write a speech. Just doing the outline for now but my thesis statement...is ....well...I think it needs help. I had a really hard time coming up with a topic to begin with. :-(
I am writing an informative speech about how to find quality health care.
Here's the thesis...
The most important steps in finding quality health care are asking questions, researching, and trusting one's intuition.
Does that seem weak to you? Seems really weak to me. How can I tweak it? Suggestions?