I just saw the post that I made about the stalker and I am sorry that it came across rude.
Your post warning about an internet "stalker and killer" is true but VERY outdated. I recommend that you check with snopes.com before posting something like this
I read your song lyrics "There's a Storm on the Horizon" and thought they were terrific. Good luck on your music venture. Someday when I'm listening to the radio, I'll know who wrote the song.
Your poem is very good! As I said I am no editor, my thoughts are merely as I would change it ideas! Good luck!!