Dear God, a poem by me

[mylilangelkayla]

It's not that good and kind of corny but its from my heart. Hope you all like it.

Dear God, I ask one thing tonight,

But first let me explain my plight.

 

I feel my heart is broke, you see,

Because my love stopped loving me.

 

He said he doesn't understand,

but all I wanted was his hand.

 

His hand to hold when times were rough,

his love and all that romance stuff.

 

I've tried and tried to tell him so,

but now he says he has to go.

 

So if our time has come to part,

I ask this with a heavy heart.

 

Please help me to my feet again,

In Jesus's name I pray, Amen.

 

[mystified1958]

Jun. 26, 2007 at 2:44 AM If you have wrote this from your heart,  then my guess is he will set you on your feet when he feels he can set you down.  For right about now he is carrying you my dear.  Feel him????

[mystified1958]

Jun. 26, 2007 at 2:45 AM PS  - Your poem is very good. 

[tylervancesmom]

Aug. 15, 2007 at 11:28 AM that poem was not corny at all... actually it was very good